Monday, September 13, 2010

Making Time Move Slowly

Finney is using descriptive details to make time seem to move more slower. There are a lot of thoughts made by Tom that were written down by Finney. For every action and step Tom makes, he would thought about the consequences/effect. Before Tom was about to break the window, he thought carefully about the result that could've have happened if he break the window and if he didn't break the window.
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  1. Mike McCoolSeptember 25, 2010 at 12:21 AM

    Sean,

    This is way too short. You need to be aiming for 200 words MINIMUM for your journal entries. If you continue to write such short entries, I will have to deduct points.

    -M. McCool

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